I woke up stranded not sure where I was. Tied up I could only see a few things. A sandwich on a table with white bread and batteries around me. A flash burnt my eyes. Suddenly I felt energetic I hurried out the door suddenly I remembered why and where I was. Two words prison island there must have been a power outage witch set offset of the lights and make the power to the door cut off."Hello".....
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tori
11/30/2017 11:46:10 am
i like the idea of prison island
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12/3/2017 08:08:54 am
Dear Rameen,
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bradley
12/12/2017 05:31:35 am
i really liked it
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George
12/12/2017 05:31:48 am
Great work ,amazing suspense (TEAM100)
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