it is time for lift off were going to china hope you have a good flight ,and were off the captain said were here i said to Jeff after we ate lunch we came over to the great wall of chinawe felt like we saw some guys trying to get over we yelled you cant get over help they said why would we help you we will give you gold why did you not get get some thing to get up there but then the tiger was bloking our escape
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lily
12/12/2017 05:15:58 am
Good story, but think about your choice of punctuation etc it is time for a lift and think about capital letters for a person a place or a thing like China
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luna
12/12/2017 05:16:25 am
hi Luke
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Jack
12/12/2017 05:17:59 am
Hi Luke
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