The tiger was blocking our escape and we had no way around the tiger. But I and Peter found knives and threw the knives at the tigers head. And the tiger wasn't dying and came running at me and Peter and the tiger opened his mouth and there was a log on the ground and Peter put the log in the tigers mouth so he wouldn't bite us. So we went around the tiger and we made it to the place we needed to go to but then we went out side again and there where a pack of tiers. To be continued...
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Kieran
12/12/2017 05:31:13 am
Wow that is a brilliant story! I really like how you said to be continued with an ellipsis.just think about your commas and punctuation so it would make sense. I also loved how you built up suspense at the end.
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