I was kidnapped and I was with a few of my freinds and i was heading to a huge castle and I saw all there beast my freinds were dalton nolan and peter and the beast were fearse looking well we were inside a dungeon were we saw a gaurd with keys so dalton pulled him to the door quickly and painfully dalton knocked him out took the keys and unlocked the door we saw 1 hallway filled with gaurds we ran passed all the gaurds with wepons then the very very very beast looking tiger was blocking are escape
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jaydan monell
12/7/2017 11:05:16 am
hello I am Jaydan Monell I loved you story it was cool and creative But I know why you put very very very it is because you wanted to get one hundred words I am not trying to be mean but come on I loved that u tried hard on this story but you also spelled guard wrong but otherwise I think it was really good I wish I could write like you its was cool you added you friends in the story you could add some more things like someone still is traped or someone got hurt
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mya thompson
12/7/2017 11:07:49 am
hi my name is Mya Thompson and i love your story very much.
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Jaelin Beyer
12/7/2017 11:08:40 am
I am Jaelin Beyer and I have some feed back for you first of all you put very very very because you wanted to waste your one hundred words easily second of all you have a lower case I in the word I then you spelt guard wrong because you spelt gaurd but I did like your story very very very much you see what I did there as you can see I really have a good sense of humor ok sorry lets get back to what I was telling you but that really was a good story.
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