The tiger was blocking our escape,I pulled my sword out of it's case and pointed it right at the tiger's neck. Just then a monkey swooped down from a tree and took the sword out of my hands and laughed at me in a tall branch. My friend Dawson sprinted up to me and as soon as he saw the tiger he fainted! The tiger roared at me and took a step closer to me . I took a pocket knife out of my sweater pocket and held it up thinking it was going to be scared of me now.
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mya thompson
12/8/2017 11:15:50 am
i love the story its really unfamiliar then what Ive seen its just with the sword trying to kill the tiger and the pocket knife
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Danial
12/12/2017 05:28:37 am
i love your story and it has lots of punctuation.But to be fair maybe you should do more description.But well done.Keep it up
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danial
12/15/2017 03:53:29 pm
love it
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