The tiger was blocking our escape. I was worried we would die. "Where are you" I asked on my walkie-talkie. Who are you with I asked. "I am with John". My friend asked me why there was a tiger. "Thats not the most important thing". I exclamied. Why do you need to escape, just kill the tiger. John said. I need backup imediatly. I said as the tiger moved in closer on me. We are coming in a helocopter about five miles away. I'll be there soon. John said. I see you. Thank you John. I got rescued.
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nolan cumbey
12/5/2017 05:35:52 pm
very great story Dalton, you did great in punctuation.
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