I was going to the zoo with one of my friends.when we weren't paying attention to where we were going,we were in the tiger cage and the tiger was blocking our escape!we stayed calm and decided to try and hide.I hid behind a bush and my friend hid behind a tree.We decided to distract the tiger.we managed to lure the tiger away.we ran as fast as we could toward the exit we barely made it out ."wow"i said still rattled from what just happened."I love the zoo so much ".
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KeyKey
12/7/2017 11:03:18 am
Hi Remeen I like how you told detail by detail and tells me whats happening in the story and gives me an image of whats happening thanks for telling a great story i liked it a lot and i hope you make more thanks.
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