"come on Peter"I screamed
"coming Parkers right behind"he said.We were playing tag nolan was it. All of a sudden a bear came out. "RUN!" screamed Parker we all sprinted but then Nolan and Parker started laughing It was Dawson under a bear suit then after we walked to the end of the woods a tiger blocked our path. "All right who's under here "i asked "Thats not are joke"Nolan replied. "Don't touch- "parker coundn't finsh his sentence. ROAR! it yelled "AUGHHH" we all screamed.it. Tigers started surrounding us.it was over. "guys were TOTALLY doomed"i mumbled quietly.
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mya thompson
12/8/2017 11:08:25 am
this story is a great story the only thing is that you didn't capitalize i when its you it should be I also you didnt capitalize most of the words first when you were saying something
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Serenity
1/10/2018 03:52:18 pm
Thats a cool story
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